SS (1994 / Ohio)

Forgiving Detection

Anger
struggle with I do
Hate
I have because of you

Pain
I daily feel
Frustration
to me so real

Hurt
eating away inside me
Bitter
I no longer want to be

Guilt
my own reflection
God
my forgiving detection

User Rating: 2,3 / 5 ( 13 votes ) 1

Comments (1)

Wow, you've improved so much! This is amazing. I'm always looking for interesting structures. Very well done.