PL (22nd may1991-i wish it to be 22nd may of some year / indore)

Form Heaven To Hell

Wet eyes and dry lips
His death is sucking up life in sips
His smile's stolen, 'ecstasy'? ? , he has never known
He had crumbled his fate, while he had grown
But till today he lives to tell

One wrong step, and you are trapped in this hell
Unaware of, when you fell...........

by POOJA LADYLUCK

Comments (2)

from saturn to venus.....alighting at earth..........swallowed by the purple holes.......i see heaven..but so near to hell...why is that?
you have probed inside this emotion very well His death is sucking up life in sips........this line is classic...good job