Freedom In Cage

Poem By yashar rezaeipour

In A Desert, The Wind Arrived A Teasel.
The Teasel Asked Him
How Can I Become Free Like You?
The Wind Laughed In His Sleeve And Told
First, Try To Bear The Pain Of Homelessness And Vagrancy
Then Be Patient And Wait.
The Freedom Comes To You Himself.
Then He Mumbled In His Heart
Cage Of Every One Is As Big As His Dream Of Freedom!

Comments about Freedom In Cage

i think the last line was very very deep and thoughtful...i liked ur poem... :)
Excellent writing You must write with a golden pen The words love you. 'Cage Of Every One Is As Big As His Dream Of Freedom! ' How true but how difficult for us to live up to Wishing you joy Pia
Very moving poem. If we allow our mind to be free then we will be too. Very nicely done. KK
This a short yet powrful one...are you really amature or you are just posting poems now? ? ? Anyway its great work yashar
I wonder - why is it only at rank 454 today? Should it not have been higher up in the pedastal? This is a masterpiece of its sort.... the mastery reflects in every line... the imagery stands-up in every word to reflect the theme of the poem!

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