Fresh Baby's Breath

The boldest moves to take,
Are those one makes...
To shake away from the past.
And divorcing from it quick!

The faster that is done,
An invited switch for a new beginning comes.
And a space that can be cleared to place...
The floral arrangement,
Of fresh baby's breath arriving.

A reminder...
For the one who commits.
With an intention,
For this kind of 'marriage' to last!
And welcoming the birth of it.

by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Comments (3)

Thank you, April for your suggestion. Poem is 'tighter' now. Much appreciated. L
Don't leave me abandoned at the 'alter'.
Great Thought. But poem does need some edit.