Full Circle

Poem By Brian Hinckley

I turn my back
for just a moment.
I can see you
and the tears in your eyes.

I turn again
just for a second.
I can see you
and the smile lighting your eyes.

I turn once more
and stay.
I can see you crying
as I keep you in my arms


Comments about Full Circle

It's all about the last scentance or word and you got this one just right. Wonderful.
Nice poem. I liked the title and the ending. Never let go to those who are most important to you. Top marks! -Michael

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