Garden Of Love

Poem By Rini Shibu

Soul in the garden of love
It's like paradise on earth
Twinkling stars wrapped in black carpet
Fresh energetic buds ready to burst
Waiting for the dawn to embrace the warmth of sun
Fragrance of my nectar allured honey bee
came  near and whispered to me
Am lost in your ardent aroma..
You are my life, you are my world..
Softly kissed and tickled  to bloom my heart..
Filled me with beauty and added colors to my life..
You sucked my nectar everyday..
Flew away I couldn't see..
Filled and stored all your hive..
You have stolen all my charm...
lost my elangance
Withered on the ground never you knew
this will be the end when you return..
Does love life give only wound?

Comments about Garden Of Love

Withered on the ground never you knew this will be the end when you return.. Does love life give only wound? ... .. charming poem
Such a heartfelt poem about love and loss. The ending of the poem is the highlight of the piece. Does love life give only wound? Brilliantly penned.
So lovely poem, , , , , , right 10 No narrow path Thursday,6th September 2018 it has the capacity to make it flowery Love has no narrow path it makes you breathe, freely without the fear of death and keeps intact your commitment to the faith Hasmukh Amathaal Mehta
Ever such beautiful heart, with such beauty within, with such beautiful love, to share and to give! .. To love so true is such a beautiful thing, even when God ends up comforting! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Such a beautiful poem dear Poet! Thanks for sharing this masterpiece with us


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