Gazhal 25

Poem By Prakashsingh Rajput

Who knows the reality of life
We are victims of love's cruelty

Making unable to every able
This is one of the attribute of love

It can melt even a hard stone
Streams also accept the stability of love

It flows like fragrance in air
All activities depend on movement of love

Every heart beat accepts it
The unseen surety of love

Comments about Gazhal 25

Nicely articulated poem. Second line of the poem needs editing so as to rhyme. A mat'ala could have enhanced the beauty of this ghazal. Thanks.
Love's beautiful tribute is interestingly presented here. Love makes unable thing to every possible. Love is powerful. Unseen surety of love is accepted by every heart beat. A beautiful poem is shared here on love topic.10
We are victims of love's cruelty! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.


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