Get You Out Of My Life

Rewrite of the Jodeci song, All My Life

by Ramona Thompson Click to read full poem

Comments (14)

Nicely done. I enjoye the piece. Thanks for sharing
Denouncing the over possessiveness and deceitful behavior of lover, throwing him out of life. Great message. Congrats on poem of the Day.
Reflected the fact of life. Thanks.
Hey Ramona, Congrats on your poem.
To pray that someone will perish shows a cruel and vicious heart, a little too much evil here for me I'm afraid
I do hope that you have got rid of him in a peaceful way. This is after all a lovely poem, well worded and excellently rendered. BUT heart wrenching. I like the spontaneous nature the poem is built up. CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. A 10 Full Score and much much more. Success I wish you in meeting the right boy-friend, some foreign blend.
Love and pain! ! ! Heartbreak. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I pray I never find another lover As bitter as you.. thoughts, experiences, bitterness, love. words. tony
Straight from the heart. A heart touching poem on failed love and how such bitter feelings one experienced. A nice poem indeed. Congrats on being selected as poem of the day.
This is a beautiful poem on deepest feeling of life having touching expression with nice collocation. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of POD.
Ramona, A very hurtful poem. may you find peace and happiness in your life.
oh love is bleeding here fear lives in fair! ! ! no room in heart for the cheater before God no prayer............////
Fine lyric... beautiful poem..////
An insightful rendition from the heart. A very passionate composition with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Ramona.