Get You Out Of My Life
Rewrite of the Jodeci song, All My Life
by Ramona Thompson
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A B Faniki
11 Sep 2019 03:28
Nicely done. I enjoye the piece. Thanks for sharing
04 Sep 2019 11:18
Denouncing the over possessiveness and deceitful behavior of lover, throwing him out of life. Great message. Congrats on poem of the Day.
04 Sep 2019 09:48
Reflected the fact of life. Thanks.
04 Sep 2019 12:11
Hey Ramona, Congrats on your poem.
04 Sep 2019 12:07
To pray that someone will perish shows a cruel and vicious heart, a little too much evil here for me I'm afraid
Sylvia Frances Chan
04 Sep 2019 11:08
I do hope that you have got rid of him in a peaceful way. This is after all a lovely poem, well worded and excellently rendered. BUT heart wrenching. I like the spontaneous nature the poem is built up. CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. A 10 Full Score and much much more. Success I wish you in meeting the right boy-friend, some foreign blend.
Edward Kofi Louis
04 Sep 2019 10:08
Love and pain! ! ! Heartbreak. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Dr Tony Brahmin
04 Sep 2019 09:33
I pray I never find another lover As bitter as you.. thoughts, experiences, bitterness, love. words. tony
Anil Kumar Panda
04 Sep 2019 07:26
Straight from the heart. A heart touching poem on failed love and how such bitter feelings one experienced. A nice poem indeed. Congrats on being selected as poem of the day.
04 Sep 2019 06:09
This is a beautiful poem on deepest feeling of life having touching expression with nice collocation. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of POD.
Darwin Henry Beuning
04 Sep 2019 04:52
Ramona, A very hurtful poem. may you find peace and happiness in your life.
04 Sep 2019 01:31
oh love is bleeding here fear lives in fair! ! ! no room in heart for the cheater before God no prayer............////
04 Sep 2019 12:12
Fine lyric... beautiful poem..////
15 Aug 2019 09:24
An insightful rendition from the heart. A very passionate composition with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Ramona.
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