Ghosts Of Girlfriends: 04

I know
a sweet, warm-
erotic feeling
lies hidden
behind the curtains
of lust on bed.

And may be
it would be
the secret
behind your
so many attempts
to commit
a suicidal act
almost every quarter
of the years
of your conjugal life.

by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Comments (5)

so many attempts to commit a suicidal act almost every quarter of the years of your conjugal life. Lovely yet a pinching remark on them. 10
I know a sweet, warm- erotic feeling lies hidden behind the curtains of lust on bed. Sir I read your poem and very happy thanks for shearing 10+++++
And may be it would be the secret behind your so many attempts to commit a suicidal act almost every quarter of the years of your conjugal life. Sir great imagination your poem10+++++++++
Well penned..! New Year Greetings 2018..! Pray God bless you..! !
This sounds poetic enough to be considered a poem, but in fact I got away with the feeling that I got a bit lost in the read of this. It seems to be the kind of verse that means more to the writer, after all he has written it, than to the reader, but I admire the diction.