Terence George Craddock (afterglows echoes of starlight)

Terence George Craddock (afterglows echoes of starlight)

Nearing End

Poem By Sujoy Bhattacharya

captures caught soul true blue poetry lovers
drifting through cast net inspiring thoughts
like Charleston alluvial gold rush catalytic
driven to allure glitter gold prospect pan lines...

not gold to swirl sift in pores
gold dust in flats mined in dirt hills
panned rivers beneath boulders
water pouring powering tread mills...

to cut timber logs for sluice lines
feelings true poet cannot deny hide
from only realized in fresh writers
panning true colour driven command...

to write enticing passion lit
candle flickering seducing lit
lines in crisp China moon flight
read by fans who search our sight...


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Comments about Nearing End

yes I meant to use the second lit, I had a specific observed candle effect in mind, but did not want to over emphasize it :) Ever noticed how colours change in candle light? Yes I replied to you :)
to write enticing passion lit candle flickering seducing lit ...............did you mean to use the second lit? if i hear from you, i may look at both poems again and comment more thoroughly. thanks for sharing. :) bri


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