LCW (27.03.73 / Northumberland, England)

Guiding Star

Will you dance with me?
Will you set me free?
Will you love me true?
and I'll be there for you.

Will you care for us?
Without any fuss
coz Im in love with you
and you love me too

Will you stand by me?
Will you stay not flee
Will you pray at night
That I'll see the light

Will we be forever?
Now we are together
Your my guiding star
You know who you are

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Comments (6)

Lovely poem. To be a guiding star for someone means a lot. The last stanza not only uplifts the poem but your beloved one too. Best Wishes Naseer
this is very nice lisa, you are a lucky lady..............well done.x
Lisa, a very loving poem here. Hope this was the start of something really good and that it will progress just as well. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it. David.
A fabulous loving poem, whoever this person is, now that the two of you are together, it looks like a solid relationship is about to be blessed. Excellent work Lisa.-Melvina-
Lisa Love is woderful when you hold it in the palm of your hand, I have done so for thirty five years and I NEVER WANT TO LET IT GO/Your poem has so much depth that you make love seem that everyone can hold it tight.A really loveable poem thankyou for every word. Cheers Sylvie
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