Haiku 02

Poem By Masaoki Shiki

the tree cut,
dawn breaks early
at my little window

Comments about Haiku 02

The tree was hiding the sunrise....Awesome.10+++
........truly a master of haiku....beautiful write..
More greats written by Shiki!
a simple message with simile.. LIKE
a paradox of loss - do you think he misses the tree?

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