Haiku 10

Poem By Masaoki Shiki

fanning out its tail
in the spring breeze,
see—a peacock!

Comments about Haiku 10

Nice haiku.....The joy of peacock just before the rains....10+++
......truly beautiful and one of my favourites...
As a lover of peacocks can't help but adore this one!
, , , , , , , Interesting to read
Peacocks is so interesting so as the poem

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