"It's the time to love"
Says sun, "…the hills as old as me.."
And this love making noon.
by Saheb Mohapatra
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26 Oct 2015 08:12
dear Saheb, I invite you to visit the HAIKU SOCIETY OF AMERICA web-site. Haiku, as a poetic form, have to respect some rules. Your write, here -as others I've read-, doesn't respect them. It remains an interesting write, but to call it 'haiku', you need to modify it. Take it as a friendly advice, from a poet to a colleague poet. Peace Fabrizio
* Sunprincess *
13 Aug 2015 06:30
........nicely written...noon is a special time ★
13 Dec 2014 06:17
Beautiful Haiku inspired by nature.