Haiku-11(Noon)

"It's the time to love"
Says sun, "…the hills as old as me.."
And this love making noon.

by Saheb Mohapatra

Comments (3)

dear Saheb, I invite you to visit the HAIKU SOCIETY OF AMERICA web-site. Haiku, as a poetic form, have to respect some rules. Your write, here -as others I've read-, doesn't respect them. It remains an interesting write, but to call it 'haiku', you need to modify it. Take it as a friendly advice, from a poet to a colleague poet. Peace Fabrizio
........nicely written...noon is a special time ★
Beautiful Haiku inspired by nature.