Haiku # 2 ‘raining Passion’

Rains can be risky
What with this pouring passion
Can turn one frisky!

by Subroto Chatterjee Click to read full poem

Comments (18)

Rain and pouring passion............ i liked the expression Pouring passion. thank you dear Poet. tony
Said so well …I’ve this to say only … 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
we seem to have broken the vessel which holds this rain
rains have come cats and dogs with full energy now shall beat drum
amazing...well said! love it! : -)
Quelling words...nice pouring
lovely lines.. quite true too..cheers
nice lines... well written! 10.. Ali
Stunning Cute 10
there is something about rain... nice one, monsoon magic. I like the humour10 Mamta
One may forget what he heard, But one will never forget how he made to feel. Such is the power of passion. It is frisk, brisk, if too much.. then it is risk... Enjoyed this read.
Yes Subroto, from the comments it is evident, it has made people 'frisky' from here to Holland! -Raj Nandy
Good one Subroto! Sensuality comes through with your Haiku! 10 Karin Anderson
Excellent write here...so much with so few words....Fi 10+++
yeh that passion can make one risky, frisky and pesky too wonderful creation, top marks-10 anjali
yeah it can turn fransisco in to fresco..and francheska can come to the movie frranchise if she dances in the rain with passion..goood versess....good that u v put copy rights, , anyone can steel u..r stuff see u 10++
connects beautifully Passion and Rain...lovely Ku
oh what a lovely placement of words.lovely haiku.posted 10 for u surya