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Haiku 39

Chilled Winter morning
Pale quarter moon wanes above
Mars and Jupiter

by Savita Tyagi

Comments (3)

I watched the twelveth January's sky and got quarter moon with wonderful scene. Dear madam, you have nicely inscribed the scenery advance in a small poem which is more interesting'. Thanks.
Your poetic sense has rightly captured a sparkling view! ..... rich poetic imagination....Galilean moon above were clearly visible to your elegant poem! Thanks for sharing!
It's really wonderful to watch the sky, a beautiful Haiku.