Haiku (Birds Singing...)

Birds singing
in the dark
—Rainy dawn.

by Jack Kerouac

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I'm sorry, Jack Kerouac. I love you, but your Haiku is a fail. Line 1-presents a problem. Line 2- solves it. Line 3- shows thankfulness.
Leaves are crispy brown. If only sweet rain would fall Leaves would smile again
This is not a correctly written Haiku. Line 1-pose a grievance or issue. Line 3- thankfulness. Line 2- connects both and 3. Line 1 and 3-five syllables. Line 2- seven syllables.
Lovely one...............................10
The sun is a ball It shines in the sky so bright It is a fires flame
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