Haiku - Gathering Water

Poem By john tiong chunghoo

mist
gathering water
my eyelashes

inspired by:

Mist
Low-anchored cloud,
Newfoundland air,
Fountain head and source of rivers,
Dew-cloth, dream drapery,
And napkin spread by fays;
Drifting meadow of the air,
Where bloom the dasied banks and violets,
And in whose fenny labyrinth
The bittern booms and heron wades;
Spirit of the lake and seas and rivers,
Bear only purfumes and the scent
Of healing herbs to just men's fields!
Henry David Thoreau

Comments about Haiku - Gathering Water

A beautiful piece of poetry! Well done!
This haiku of yours is so subtle :) Excuse what i said to you weeks ago- it's averyone else's fault if theý don't publish when you churn out your poems in batches on one day


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