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Haiku - Sad
(5-19-1967 / Dallas, Texas)

Haiku - Sad

mountains that arise
clouds that darken the day sky
sad I sit and cry

Revised

mountains rise
clouds darken the sky
I sit and cry

User Rating: 4,8 / 5 ( 2 votes ) 5

Comments (5)

mountains rise clouds darken the sky I sit and cry excellent 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Such lovely haiku's! Nicely done!
Perfect and very open. Nice
half of the mount bathed in light bahted in shadow
Love it, short and to the point, says alot