PW (09/11/1956 / ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA)

Haiku – Your Path Forward

Blue sky forever on
Stretching to the horizon
Is your path planned?

© Paul Warren Poetry

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Comments (12)

a question to be seriously that before it's replied.
Though our life may be destined to tale a particular route but with planning and determined action, one can alter the course of things to come. Nice poem. Thanks, Paul.
Pregnant with positivist and impregnated with introspection is this short but significant submission. Well done Paul!
excellent little haiku done in a 6'7'4 format. short, sweet and precise. great job. hopefully i am on the right path now in my life. Regards Tia
it is beautifully planned haiku...excellent.....
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