Hail To The Master (First Line Haiku)

For I'm a sad one,
a lonely, thoughtful figure
for you to treasure.

Who be the tyrant
ignoring all God's wishes,
he will be slaughtered.

John Tiong Chunghoo is
the omnipotent master
of Haiku pleasure.

by Herbert Nehrlich

Comments (2)

Your not too bad yourself Herbert!
dear herbert, i only saw this just now. i wonder when this was written. anyway thank you for mentioning my name. there are plenty of good haiku writers actually. the manichi shinbun and asahi shinbun carry regular haiku columns. i am very surprised by your writing. thanks and keep on. hopefully we can meet up one of these days. i am a travel writer in malaysia.