Hatred

Heavy hangs this drunken curse
Assuring Man’s demise.
Take him down by doleful hearse
Reflect now as he lies,
Educate before ‘tis worse,
Decree that love must rise.


Copyright © Mark R Slaughter 2009

by Mark R Slaughter

Comments (4)

Each one of these lines is so powerful! ! Splendind work Mr. Slaughter! ! 10++! ! !
Yep, great work Mark, strong lines that say it all 10+
Here you are a champion of acrostic..............Good Write.........Still i like your humorous poems most..........
Excellent acrostic Mark....I love the challange in making poetry from a word...10+++