' He's In My Dream '

Poem By Riquetta Elliott

I am covered in heavy cloth
In peace.
I closed my eyes and
Visioned a friend as in
My lover.
As I dream in the mind, I dream that
He is with me.
As we were in covers, our bodies
As I touch him, he touch me.
When I kiss him, he kiss me.
Something amazed that him and I
Was going to make and yes we
Undressed naked.
We were about to begin with the sexual experience,
But the eyes of mine was open.
He was gone.
Then I have a wish of saying I
Wish the presence of my lover who
Called himself a 'Black Fabio' will come
Back into my dreams again.

Comments about ' He's In My Dream '

Sweet and wonderful poem///
Very inventive and equally well worded - - a good write and a ten from me -- Fay..
Beautiful poetic story, you have narrated well...Thanks for the share...10+++
That's a beautiful poem! A nice story, just check your grammar. I love it, don't give up; keep on writing. Great inspiration!
You mean one error :)

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