Poem By Mir Monis Zafar

Suppressed words, fogged mind
Haunting memories, blurred images
Bruised heart, aching soul
There she goes, breakin' my heart

Comments about Heartache

You've captured the essence and tortured state of mind of one whose heart has been broken. Focused and factual. Thanks for sharing Monis.
A painful situation arising out of the break up of a relationship has been captured scrupulously. The poem brings out a very poignant picture. Thanks.

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