Tagore Poem (297) On Such Day I Can Tell Her, Amidst Such Rain-Drench Day Mind Be Open

(emon dine tare bolajay emo ghonoghor borishay)

On such a day I can tell her
Amid such rain-drencing
In such day mind be opened
In such thunderous steady rainfall
Such sunless dark day

None else will hear that word
In isolated quiet surrounding
Two sitting face to face deeply sad
Sky above showering nonstop
As if there is none else in the world

The society culture, all are wrong
Wrong are the false noises of life
Drinking just nectar of eye by eye
Feeling a heart by the very heart
Everything else vanished in dark

What harm can that do to others?
If mind’s burden can be unloaded
In Shrabon shower, in cozy home
If telling a few words nearing her
What would that matter to others?

This day passing away at great speed
The lightening appearing frequently
As if Life’s words remaining in mind
Can be articulated in such type day
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by Tushar Ray

Comments (8)

Every reader may be transfixed to the thought of the end of life is seen in response to the involvement of nature.
In death, we are all together Why then labour for unity here A very insightful poem!
Hi Kim, easy to answer your question, both questions. Having studied classics and literature with love and passion, this loves are siren calls to me. To quote both sources, 'Hero and Leander is the Greek myth relating the story of Hero (Ancient Greek: Ἡρώ, Hērṓ; pron. like hero in English) , a priestess of Aphrodite who dwelt in a tower in Sestos on the European side of the Hellespont (today's Dardanelles) , and Leander (Ancient Greek: Λέανδρος, Léandros) , a young man from Abydos on the opposite side of the strait. Leander fell in love with Hero and would swim every night across the Hellespont to be with her. Hero would light a lamp at the top of her tower to guide his way. Succumbing to Leander's soft words and to his argument that Venus, as the goddess of love, would scorn the worship of a virgin, Hero allowed him to make love to her. These trysts lasted through the warm summer. But one stormy winter night, the waves tossed Leander in the sea and the breezes blew out Hero's light; Leander lost his way and was drowned. When Hero saw his dead body, she threw herself over the edge of the tower to her death to be with him.' 'Hero and Leander is a poem by Christopher Marlowe that retells the Greek myth of Hero and Leander. After Marlowe's untimely death it was completed by George Chapman. The minor poet Henry Petowe published an alternative completion to the poem. The poem was first published posthumously, five years after Marlowe's demise.' The poem I am familiar with is the 'Hero and Leander' by Christopher Marlowe, but completed by George Chapman after the wonderfully gifted poet Marlowe was stabbed to death. I think Donne is lamenting the death of Hero, Leander and the poet Marlowe who was a great influence upon William Shakespeare. Marlowe reminds me so much of Johnny Deep, charismatic, endearing in indifference. Donne also is brilliant, mystic, fascinating, thus by associations, webs of connections powerfully increase the meaning of these two brief lines for me.
Pardon my ignorance, but who was Leander and who is the Hero to whom he refers? Where is John Richter to fill us in on these details?
A meaningful poem and in fact with few sentence the great expression of poem.
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