BH (07-30-81 / Buffalo, New York)

Hot Soup And Cold Bread

Hot soup and cold bread
mark the paths of my day.
Almost mocking me,
Panera gives french onion
a bad name.

My day has gone
from good to poor
in a single heartbeat;
continues to sink.

I let myself fall, again,
only to have it end as usual.
Hot soup and cold bread,
you are a poor substitute.

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Figurative language con sometimes be a good illustration if used properly. I thought this one was. GW62