JT (9/4/84 / ohio)

How I Feel

As i look at you
my heart tumbles to
the bottom of my stomach

As i watch you
I see how much
I miss you

How much i miss
your beautful eyes,
your beautful long hair,
you beautful voice,
and just your beauty
all around

As i look at you
my heart tumbles to
the bottom of my stomach

by joshua treece

Comments (1)

not bad at all. I would like to see a bit more clarification regarding how the protagonist appears to be looking at someone he misses. Is he looking at a photo or video of somebody passed?