RMJ ( / Laoag City, Philippines)

Hugs

He hugs everyone
His hold is so tight
He should use a deodorant.


Copyright 2017, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

by Rose Marie Juan Austin

Comments (17)

Charming humor. Very real, Rose!
deodorant for frequent hugs!
This is definitely a senryu: it has that sharp, incisive line at the end! But I take it as a haiku: for I very much love hugs, more than kisses! Loved it!
Using deodorant is a fashion of modern civilization. This poem reflects clearly.
He should use a deodorant. Really i smiled when i finished reading this. lovely poem. tony
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