Monkey Mind

Long long ago

Man was real

Monkey...

Today man's

Walking change

Working change

Body change

Sence also change

Talking change

Thinking change

But...,

Man's mind only

Not change

For monkey....!

All man's mind was

Monkey's thear...

You watch and

Remove it...!

by Otteri Selvakumar

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Comments (6)

scared of the love that will never come Rachel Ann Butler
Hi Glaedr the Poet, i like what you have written, but i do find it a tad depressing. I urge you to continue with this poem until you reach the point where you are crying. I walked down your road once before, and today i stand proud when i say, 'I am... TRUTH.' it's who you are. it's what you'll live. it's what you have to give
i love how you are so simple then go into detail.... i might have to use this in some of my poems....spacific and saying everything.......yet words speak the truth were are you from? ? ? ? me by jeff
This poem is so true about life cause life really is depressing.........
It is a bit depressing - but hey, that's poetry, eh? The mood and tone and structure are all very supporting of your main theme and express your (emotion) very powerfully. Good work!
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