I Am (Emotion)
I am tired
tired of the walls closed around me
tired of blindness when I wish to see
I am scared
by Glaedr the poet
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Rachel Ann Butler
21 Sep 2009 04:26
scared of the love that will never come Rachel Ann Butler
Alexander La Var
30 Dec 2008 03:45
Hi Glaedr the Poet, i like what you have written, but i do find it a tad depressing. I urge you to continue with this poem until you reach the point where you are crying. I walked down your road once before, and today i stand proud when i say, 'I am... TRUTH.' it's who you are. it's what you'll live. it's what you have to give
04 May 2007 09:29
i love how you are so simple then go into detail.... i might have to use this in some of my poems....spacific and saying everything.......yet words speak the truth were are you from? ? ? ? me by jeff
25 Apr 2007 10:06
This poem is so true about life cause life really is depressing.........
24 May 2006 11:00
It is a bit depressing - but hey, that's poetry, eh? The mood and tone and structure are all very supporting of your main theme and express your (emotion) very powerfully. Good work!
24 May 2006 09:27
Hmm…very interesting. I pretty much admire the way you describe how failing life can be in the way of a poem. Love it. Knocks in much sense.