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I Am Holding Your Eyes Hostage
WSS ( / Iowa)

I Am Holding Your Eyes Hostage

I am
Holding your eyes
Your Mind
is free

User Rating: 4,5 / 5 ( 3 votes ) 8

Comments (8)

Nice beginning I would like to see more of this in detail Tell me more about the eyes; Why is the others persons mind wandering where does it go.
I am lost for words...good job!
I like how simply you tell it. Hail to the power of persuasion!
I really like your style Wanda. Very nice. sincerely, mary
so succinct yet mischievously clever! i love it! Jake
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