I Cant Take This Anymore

Poem By crystal angel

I wish that someone just knew
I wish that someone could just see
I wish that I didn’t have to keep lying
I wish that someone would just take the time to ask me


I can’t keep doing this anymore
I can’t keep putting this smile on my face
I can’t keep lying to myself and others
I can’t keep going this circling pace

I don’t want to go on like this
I don’t want my heart constantly torn in half
I don’t want to keep hurting
I don’t want to try to keep up a laugh

I won’t do this anymore
I won’t keep letting my insides rot
I won’t let people think it’s still ok
I won’t give them a chance to see that its not

I wish I didn’t have to do this anymore
I don’t want to do this anymore
I can’t keep doing this anymore
I won’t keep doing this anymore

I can’t take this anymore

Comments about I Cant Take This Anymore

I'm impressed by the thinking that went into the structure of this poem, but I didn't think the structure helped the poem that much. Still, I do recommend its readind because it is worth getting through. Other poets might well learn from this. GW62


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