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I Feel Joy

When I look in your eyes
I find joy and peace
When you hold me in your arms
I found comfort


When am not in the mood
You make me happy
Love is what brought us together.
I feel joy in love

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Good poem. Can be improved. There is a confusion of tenses. May I suggest that the poem would read better as follows: When I look into your eyes I find joy and peace; When you hold me in your arms I find comfort. When I'm not in the mood You make me happy; Love is what has brought us together. I feel joy in love.
what a blessing this fine poem expressing love and devotion keep up the good work