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I Live In You.
AS (19th March 1989 / India)

I Live In You.

Poem By Ankur Shrivastava

My love dwells in your heart
Like a baby in the womb
Of surrogate mother,

Unwanted, perhaps not cherished
Yet nurtured with great care,

Arising emotions conflicting,
Yet so tender;
I live in you.

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The reference to the baby in the womb of a surrogate mother is definitely the high point. And i sir agree with Lal sir and think that rhyme wasn't needed! Preets
Nice but why can't you write it in a rhyming way? If this is your style, then kudos...


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