I Miss You

I always miss
And dream of you
Day and night

And of your silky kisses too
Like these roseate butterflies
Fluttering down to alight
Gracefully and softly

On those longing lips alone
Of my yearning dreams

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Comments (8)

Excellent, subtle erotic.Very much I like it.10v. Maria Barbara Korynt
Beautiful and charming poem. Written in the light and enrapturing way.
this comparison: ''And of your silky kisses too Like these roseate butterflies'' fulfill with color and this mixed metaphor: ''Fluttering down to alight Gracefully and softly'' can amplify so deeply....the missing...10++
Softly romantic like the butterflies floating down - I like it Nizamettin - Cindy
lovely simile and image painted well here............romantic!
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