AK (13 November 1991 / Katima Mulilo, Namibia)

I Submit

i submit to your body
i admit to this slavery
tender touch and blissful kiss
breaking free of freedoms mist
for love is to submit
and to you i do submit
take my hands and place a chain
for your love is my life's flame
do you say that you agree
or do you prefer to set me free?

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Comments (7)

Short, sweet and deep. This poem is awesome.
a nice one with an interesting twist! 10+
Nice meditative poem about love, thank you for sharing...10+++
Nice i Love it.10! i like how the rhythm is exposed
nice narration. good to read.10++++
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