AA (05.04.1980 / Mansehra)

I Was Innocent And Unknown

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25/03/09

I was innocent and unknown

Time has left me alone
My dream has turned to stone
Your absence from my life
Your presence has shown

The love that’s ever been
Its fragrance has gone
Love we were filled with
It’s not or not shown

Life’s about to end with
The sorrows you have thrown
It will be my love story
That will make you known

The places we played and sung
There trees of ache have grown
My love was journey to death
I was innocent and unknown

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Comments (5)

a touching poem beautifully ended..10+++ The places we played and sung There trees of ache have grown My love was journey to death I was innocent and unknown
Oh my goodness, really beautiful :)
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No doubt, nice and beautiful flow Thanks a lot for sharing 10+
Nice wording, beautiful flow. I enjoyed it very much. Please feel free to read and comment on my works. Thank you Rabbit