VM (18/06/1974 / chennai)

Icing Without Cake

Relationship without integrity
Is like a joshless love
Love without trust
Is like a colorless rainbow
Faith without respect
Is like a captain less ship
Happiness without indulgence
Is like flightless bird
A flower without honey
Is like a flutter less butterfly
A fish without water
Is like a directionless stream
Life without intimacy
Is like an ICING WITHOUT CAKE

by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Comments (2)

Great piece of work! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Some of the lines, what they seem to say, I agree with. The overall effect of this poem is good, and the diction utilized to carry the message is not bad. Thanks! Luis Estable