LB (31 may 1991 / empangeni, south africa)

If I Could Talk...

If i could talk, i would tell you that i cared.
i would try to say how i've never felt this way
and no one else could make me feel like this

If you weren't blind you'd see, just how much you mean to me
you don't even see when you're standing next to me
just tell me why it's hard to let you go...

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Comments (6)

This is a very impressive poem. Stay the course and continue to write for all to enjoy. I give it a 10 Lynn
Simple words that nevertheless are very expressive!
Forty poems later, you find it difficult to talk? ? He may be blind, but not deaf. So OK, this may be serious, and I honestly don't want to trivialise this. Wish you all the best. Cheers. Subroto
wow, maybe you are shy like me that is why you could not talk ;) very beautiful poem pretty girl, well done...10 Hataw
i love this poems..
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