Illusionary Attraction

Her freshness-
meets him
at the scent.
hungry for her
he listens
for fear of missing'
a line
her words are
worth rescuing-
they sway in the breeze
inside his head
while the night air
strange alterations
to the spark
that brought them together.

by Adryan Barnathan

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this poem is amazing- it creates new visualizations, senses, and an expression that is secret and original. i crave it and it justifies things- but maybe all its about is a woman's perfumed wiles cheating a man into lusting for her?