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Imperfect Solution
(29 September 1970 / South Africa)

Imperfect Solution

Poem By YURI DURAAN

I starved and lost 10 kilos because you said
I was fat.
You did not acknowledge it because it was not
Absolute goal weight.

I trained and ran 21 kms because you said
I was lazy.
You did not acknowledge it becauase it was not the
Ultimate Human Race.

I make your breakfast every morning because you say
I am useless.
You do not acknowledge it because it is my
Wifely duty.

I continuously plan my suicide because you say
My life is worthless.
Of course, you would never acknowledge it because it probably would
Not be perfect.

User Rating: 4,7 / 5 ( 3 votes ) 3

Comments (3)

sometimes our solution lacks the wisdom to see beyond... its end..good that you have made a poem that say what is reality.... i am reminded... thank you my friend...wonderful indeed a 10/10
wow yuri, this is such a strong piece, your raw honesty speaks volumes which is backed up the imagery that is impressed upon me. such a sad yet inspiring poem. I can relate to this on many levels
Neat poem. A bit heavy at the end when you talk about suicide, which I hope is not serious and, if not, gives the poem a weight I don't think you want it to have.


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