In Puerto Rico

Poem By Elaine Oxamendi Vicet

Soft waters lapping the shores
souls sitting
minds moulded
hearts together

Quietly speaks the one voice
Quietly speaks, as hearts respond.

Passersby
Birds fly
A swimmer in the distance
Activity everywhere
Yet a still quiet moment is shared.

Little talk
spontaneous little nothing laughs
Arms circle
Comfort, warmth, abundance of care.

Dusk falls
the afternoon now spent
Skies grow grey
the waves edge closer
Less activity everywhere.

Hearts still pound.
Arms still circle.
Comfort, warmth, abundance of care.

Gentle pounding
beats the tempo of love.

Rise, its time to go.
Night now falls
the evening now spent.

Souls move
minds moulded
hearts together
care and love is there.
Arms circle
heads gently touch
hands hold
as feet move.
Love and care is there!

Comments about In Puerto Rico

that's a lovely piece indeed...well woven in to a poetic mattress of love..a comfortable double layer one I mean....makes me feel so at ease..thanks 10+++
beautiful lines wonderful poem
Purity and passion combined, your style is so unique in language and expression and imagery, Elaine.I feel as if transported to Puerto Rico :) Thank you. Best wishes. A.
the waves building up the tempo of love..resonant imagery,10+
So much colour used in this beautiful blend of words and scene.....like glitter falling down the page my friend....brilliant job 10+


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