In The Blink Of An Eye

In the blink of an eye you were gone
Too many obstacles to overcome
So many issues from women in your past
Sadly we were destined never to last
Understanding, compassion totally lost
Unwilling to be strong
Leaving the baggage from the past behind
Was the only way we could have survived

by susette varga

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Unwilling to be strong Leaving the baggage from the past behind Was the only way we could have survived.....thinking about the past and reflecting to save the love and the relationship.. thank u dear poetess.. dev
thoughtful saying - Sadly we were destined never to last great 10++
Lovely lines filled with a laudable lesson! Leaving the baggage is not always easy but it is necessary for survival. Well done!
Sad write but smart decision. Thank you for sharing
‘In The Blink Of An Eye’ is a sweet little poem! I find the epitome of the poem in the last two lines. Thanks for sharing. You may like to read my poem ‘Ode to My Conscience’. Thank you!
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