AW (7/09/1940 / Hong Kong)

In This Circle

Your poems are so wise
I enjoy them as apple pies
Many terms need to learn
Words copied by heavy pen.

For my English is so bad
I used to read and repeat
Absorb them into my brain
I can read in day and night

Hoping to rise up standard
Easily write to a good start
How can write is my problem
Here I can take in so much

Your poems appear are chewed
Every word and meaning fitted
I push my heart to catch them
So all of you are my teachers

I feel good luck to meet you
All your frank words are worthy
To read to think deep and deeper
I enjoy poetic life in each second

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Comments (1)

Thank You, you are very expressive in your writing. I am sure if I could read your poems in your language it would be perfect