' Infinite Depths Of Heaven

From infinite depths of heaven,
warrior clouds
ignite the universe
to flame.....................
Descending
upon the unsuspecting
Tranquility
of a sleeping earth.................
about to be
awakened by

a kiss.


6/07/2009
*written as a response to 'Gently Upon The Still'.

by Linda Ori

Comments (14)

Lovely poem of showers heaven sent and ending just how I would love to wake up, how could we do without this wonder first but not last visit uavaniceday regards
Sweet and serene and comforting as monsoon showers on heated earth...gud one
Ha ha, that surprised me. I was expecting something bad to happen and then we got kissed. Very clever. Good poetry.
Excellent, lovely, short, cute 10+++
this is a perfect example of allowing th eemotions to shape the form...
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