SR (September 29,2001 / Bellingham, Washington)

Inner Violence

I feel a mad rush of violence soar,
Throughout my veins and out my pores,
I feel things I know not what for,
A battle inside of myself to restore,
A stable mentality or else I'm done for,
My inner self is becoming a civil war,
This shall last forever no nevermore,
Bringing what's inside into the outdoor.

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A battle inside of myself to restore, A stable mentality or else I'm done for../// the agitation of inner inn the true mirror of life; insightful sight guides truly wherever it goes
Quite personal, but a very common experience, well crafted in to a poem, which deserves its positioning. Congratulations. Thanks for sharing. X
To recognise this battle is the beginning to changing it. You can do anything. Thank You Sketcher
Well penned poem, clearly showing the duality or good/evil that exists in our conscious mind. Congratulations! : -)
An insightful creation nicely brought forth in verse with rhythmic splendour. Thanks for sharing, Sketcher.
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