(9 April 1974 / Cape Town)
by Kazi Nazrul Islam
Other poems of ISLAM (264)
Allah Amar Provu, Amar Nahi Nahi Voy
A Tribute From The Poet
Mora Eki Brinte Duti Kusum Hindu-Musalman
The Wine Of God's Love
05 Dec 2014 09:52
OK, but spoiled by the spelling error (disappears is correct) , careful poets check their work. Rhymed poetry needs lines of the same length, so the fourth verse doesn`t work, and the repeated first word tires the reader. And you should write little girl`s heart, you need the genitive.
05 Dec 2014 09:04
A simple but beautiful poem on innocence. When lost is very hard to regain. But life must go on. Good.
05 Dec 2014 07:51
Well expressed, full of emotion.
05 Dec 2014 04:40
Beautifully written Mandi this poem about the theft of physical innocence. The innocence of the soul though remains intact.
05 Dec 2014 02:29
I am so excited to read this poem, Mandi, and how well you have explained the disappearance of innocence- Innocence disappears like dew in the sun. Thank you very much.10 out of 10.