Innocence

Innocence stolen without my permission
Innocence gone without my submission

Innocence lost through another's plan

by Mandi Ducroq Click to read full poem

Comments (35)

OK, but spoiled by the spelling error (disappears is correct) , careful poets check their work. Rhymed poetry needs lines of the same length, so the fourth verse doesn`t work, and the repeated first word tires the reader. And you should write little girl`s heart, you need the genitive.
A simple but beautiful poem on innocence. When lost is very hard to regain. But life must go on. Good.
Well expressed, full of emotion.
Beautifully written Mandi this poem about the theft of physical innocence. The innocence of the soul though remains intact.
I am so excited to read this poem, Mandi, and how well you have explained the disappearance of innocence- Innocence disappears like dew in the sun. Thank you very much.10 out of 10.
Innocence dissapears like dew in the sun Innocence faded before it's begun very nice and congrats
A great poem on innocence and it liked.
Good poem. [dissapears] should be [disappears] though.
Lost innocence is irreplaceable. People who smear it are but animals. The pains of losing 'innocence' eloquently expressed.10/10 from me.
Painful... The time may cover the wound, life may close it, but the scar is always there and each time a thought goes back, will hurt just like an open wound. If there is anything to heal such pain might be a soul filled with love. I guess you already have it. Thank you for share.
It is sad when innocence is lost to forced submission. What do we say to social culture where young ones are encouraged to loose it at the earliest. A thoughtful write.
Very clear on the topic of rape, a large issue in some places more than others. Psychological effects and formation into future described well. Nice write
innocence of a young child is removed physically and emotionally here. what do you think about removing their innocence through our own explicit behavior, exposure to visual media, encouraging them to drink and smoke and many many more. Innocence that is seen to be lost is well written here! the rest? ? ? ? any way I give you full marks!
splendidly done - love it................................
splendidly done - love it................................
splendidly done - love it................................
Many who are innocent have been beguiled worlwide. Good thought, great write
Beautifull poem Mandi, innocence we were all born with, now we scarcely have it. Very thoughtful too.
Beautifull poem Mandi, innocence we were all born with, now we scarcely have it. Very thoughtful too.
Beautiful poetry very deep great job