Inspirational Haiku - Forgive

and you'll
be forgiven

by john tiong chunghoo

Comments (3)

ECCL: 3 says different but forgiving is true
So True John... Andrew 10
How can this be a haiku? forgive = 2 syllables and you'll = 3 be forgiven = 4 9 syllables instead of 17? No concrete image! No nature reference! Consider these - the fat lady bends over the tomatoes a full moon by a. pizzarelli a single tulip! hopelessly i passed on a drizzling rain... washing their blood into their blood by m. mcclintock