A Bridge Over Troubled Water

Like a bridge over troubled water
I stood, your burden to shoulder
What I had, with you I shared
Every step you took, I cared
Pushed you to soar high
Nudged you to learn and try
You are a diamond
You are a champion
You are a winner
You are a life fighter
As a friend, I was there
Your burden to share
Your burden to shoulder

Dear friend, you must sail on
Your dream to build upon
You can make it happen
I will go on with my mission


by Paul Sebastian

Comments (3)

The expression in this is both open and honest and you have done very well in my opinion.Love Duncan
I agree with Roy the and isnt necessary though its a good poem.
You do not need the and in the last line. Take care Roy.