A Bridge Over Troubled Water

Like a bridge over troubled water
I stood, your burden to shoulder
What I had, with you I shared
Every step you took, I cared
Pushed you to soar high
Nudged you to learn and try
You are a diamond
You are a champion
You are a winner
You are a life fighter
As a friend, I was there
Your burden to share
Your burden to shoulder

Dear friend, you must sail on
Your dream to build upon
You can make it happen
I will go on with my mission

11.12.2015

by Paul Sebastian

Comments (3)

The expression in this is both open and honest and you have done very well in my opinion.Love Duncan
I agree with Roy the and isnt necessary though its a good poem.
You do not need the and in the last line. Take care Roy.